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[Thunderja]

The demon is startled by your entry into his room at first, but as he looks you up and down, he begins to laugh. Much larger than the other soldiers, the general is armed with a large sword and is protected by some heavy armor. The Demonic General has been moderately wounded.

A Demonic General tried to attack Hurricane with its Halberd but Hurricane's armor blocked the blow.

lol see the problem?

Edited by Thunderja, 05 April 2005 - 08:36 AM.

[Oracle]

Hmm a Halberd doesn't really look like a large sword in my opinion. I think the description should say 'large Halberd' or 'large weapon' etc.

[Lifeless Void]

True.

[Sean]

It used to say halberd didn't it?

[JLH]

suggest an improved description, and the best one will be changed for.

[Sean]

The demon is startled by your entry into his room at first, but as he looks you up and down, he begins to laugh. Much larger than the other soldiers, the general is armed with a Halberd and is protected by some heavy armor. The Demonic General has been moderately wounded.

[Ryuku]

The demon is startled by your entry into his room at first, but as he looks you up and down, he begins to laugh. Much larger than the other soldiers, the general is armed with a particularly large weapon and is protected by some heavy armor. He brings out his weapon and swings it around with a huge amount of power! The Demonic General has been moderately wounded.

I think I spelled amount wrong, ammount is it? They both look wrong to me.

[Wolfgang]

I like Ryuku's, thus far. Of the two suggested. >_>

[EvilDognapot]

The demon is not at all phased by your presence and is attacking you with the well honed skill of someone bound by infinite to repeatedly slash, chop, and thrust his coveted halberd against anyone who would oppose him.

or comedy option:
the demon grudgingly acknowledges your presence and forces himself to go through the paces just one more time.

Demonic General: i'm not giving you another halberd until you've finished the one you've got!
Demonic General: what's wrong with the halberds you already have?
Demonic General: Jesus H. Christ! I just got this thing home!
Demonic General: Go ahead and rob my grave, I'll just rob your cradle later!
Demonic General: Nobody ever comes for the poobies anymore...

[Lifeless Void]

nice dognapot, very nice

[Voltan]

The demon is standing beside his desk as you enter into his room. He Glances over at you and grins wickedly.The Demonic General is holding a Unusually large Poleaxe and is protected by his Thick Platemail. He Taps his pole ax against his hand Taunting you. Without warning he swings it at you in a Unholy rage! The Demonic General has been moderately wounded.


hows that?


Demonic General: How Can you defeat that which is not alive?
Demonic General: My army Is made by those who are Dead.
Demonic General: Im Looking to Recruit New Member into my Dead army!!!!
Demonic General: Mwahahahahahahahah!!!!!!!

Edited by Voltan, 06 April 2005 - 08:33 PM.

[trigger happy]

The demon is startled by your entry into his room at first, but as he looks you up and down, he begins to laugh. Much larger than the other soldiers, the general is armed with a particularly large weapon and is protected by some heavy armor. He brings out his weapon and swings it around with a huge amount of power! The Demonic General has been moderately wounded.

I think I spelled amount wrong, ammount is it? They both look wrong to me.

i vote that one! lol its the best to me...seems to sit good with the uhmm...i guess i can say personality? of the monster..or iam just being dumb and like that one lol nice job though

[Lifeless Void]

I dunno, maybe we should make the DG a funny guy so Ima keep my vote for dognapots remark!