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[Hatchet Crew]

Ok yes i know this has been a privous topic but i have a few poems that i have recently made and would like to know if anyone else has made sum 2?

Set me free
Then let me be
Break the chains
Then bring the pains
Pull me out of my shell
Then go to hell
Crack the seal
Are you for real?
You’re the greatest
But I can’t stand you
I love to be around you
But you drive me insane
Its crazy how it is
But this is how we live
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Today i realized how it will be
Forever to be alone i now can see
It rips me apart to know the truth
But over and over i have seen the proof
Its pains me to know
That i mean nothing
Luckly to myself i'm still sumthing
I'll hold it in and try not to let them see
How much it hurts me
But soon enough it will all come out
And i'll just sit about and pout
I all i ever wanted was to be loved
Is there sumthing wrong with wanting a simple hug
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Always keeping it in
Never telling whats deep within
I'll always keep my feelings to myself
Because they can't be trusted with by anyone else
I tried to let them out
But nobody want to hear anyones problems
After all they got there own
So every night i go to sleep
Telling myself that everything will be alright
But i wake up the next day
All my feelings still in the way
What do i do
I have no one to go to
So i go through the process again
hoping that i'll grow immuned to the pain

[Hatrix]

Nice poems. I don't really have any... But you sure do type nice when you're in 'poem-mode', don't you? It'd be nice to see you type that way all the time.

Just kidding. Nicely done.

[Zelimos]

http://www.poems.squiggleuk.com

[Amy]

Here are a few of mine that I have published. Hope you enjoy.
~The person behind Amy


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Stories

Carressing you with its words
Pulling you into its pages
Winding you around its plot
Meant only to entangle your mind
Confuse it- twist it
Bringing it to a frame of mind
Then turning the page one again
Leaving you with questions and answers
Wondering what the end will bring

Shella Rae Mills

Copyright ©2004 Shella Rae Mills


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The Leaf

The wind brings a fallen leaf of many colors into your view
You can see it clearly, but the hues blend together
Not knowing where one starts and the others begin
You can hear the rustle of many as you step on them,
Step over them, or crush them beneath your heel.
In its state now seemingly somehow defeated
The wind beaten edges, The bug eaten holes
The crinkling where it got way too much sun and not enough water
The bent stem which held it to its life force
Only to be either pulled away or dropped
No longer needed as the seasons change
Pick one up, is the most beautiful thing you will ever see
For its surface shows all of its life
Should it be picked up? preserved?
Saved forever in the pages of a book?
Who knows, examine it, study it, search its veins for life
Is it done, left there only to dry up? Crumble beneath your heel?
Blow away with the wind? Disappearing forever from view?
Or saved in the pages of a book?


Shella Rae Mills

Copyright ©2004 Shella Rae Mills

[Zelimos]

just in curiosity, any feedback on the poems i wrote? they are my first poems.

Those are really good Amy, keep it up.

Edited by Squiggle, 05 May 2004 - 07:13 PM.

[Amy]

Good poems squiggle. Remember that poems need not rhyme though unless you wish them to. In my opinion anyway. Keep writing.

~Amy

[Zelimos]

well the one called Escape doesn't rhyme. i just like patterns sometimes.

[Amy]

I know squiggle and good work was just stating something is all. Writing can be anything you wish.. or any pattern you wish.

[alone]

Just Want To Hurt You-
Tired of your mindless talk
Crawling under my skin to burn,
Your endless whispers turn to hate.
Can't you see what you do,
Can't you see what you are.

Why these words you use,
Don't you dare breathe the same air as me.
Grow up and join your side,
I know where you rest,
Just don't close your eyes tonight.

With your blood over my hands,
I'm hiding inside your bed
Feeling the warmth you left behind
The last of your existence.


We can't be alone- (wrote after listening to a Pearl Jam song)
I got a gun,
You've got the will.
Oh lets get out of here,
Get out of here at last.
Oh everyone's confused.
Lets hide up in my room.
I don't want to be left here alone
Sat up in my room, without you.
So lets get out of this place we call home.
Straight out of here,
Straight out towards the sunset.
Can't stop for friends,
They know we're fine.
Don't stop for friends,
They'll know where we're going now.
So hold onto my hand.
We don't want to be alone.
We can't be alone,
So long as we're together.


All rights reserved, © Karl Peacock. Copying without permission is forbidden.

Edited by alone, 05 May 2004 - 08:20 PM.

[Julius]

Its not serious or anything, I had to write this with a bunch of others for an English prject, but this one just kinda stuck with me.

Ode to my Weedwacker

It chops the weeds,
It eats the grass,
and all it needs,
is a little gas.

Copyright © Derrin Ashley

[Amy]

I whisper softly
Secrets and confessions
Pouring my heart and soul out between shallow breaths
I speak of everything I wish I had said before
Words tumble from wine colored lips without hesitation this time
I only want to explain
I only want to make you understand
But you do not hear me
I stand here alone

~Shella Rae Mills~

[Lich]

Upon the rocks the warrior stands,
rusted sword within his hands.
Broken dreams and broken trust
push his heart, turned to dust.

His tears do fall upon the sands
as he looks upon his hands.
Into the heavens he soon cries,
as another warrior dies.

But still he sets himself in pride,
as that warrior bled and died.
"Ive seen the pain and what it cost,
innocence and virtue lost."

"But now upon these rocks I stand,
with this sword in my hand.
Broken now and broken then,
never to be broken again."

So enemy and friend behold,
their final tale has not been told.
Their path is chosen, their mind is set,
and I promise you, they're not done yet.

[Amy]

totally awesome liche!

[Lich]

Amy i have been Rping for aabout 15 years, I wright poems and stories for every rp I have ever been in. I started a forum where others could poost their stuff as well I am also curently wrighting a book toatlly based on Rps done by broken. If you would like to read them here is the link.


http://lichdabezerke...1.com/index.cgi



The book im wrighting is under books and it is called broken a thousand times before.

Edited by Lich, 05 May 2004 - 09:07 PM.

[FrogLuver]

i cant rhyme!!!!

```there once was a man that slept in a canoe
and every morning would wake with a hand full of goo```

~BETH~ (Gothic_Angel)

[Vampyre]

Expectations

Nothing ever turns out the way you hope.
Expect something and your heart'll be broke.
Want nothing and you might as well be dead.
Would you truthfully choose life over death instead?

[Raylen]

*does a silly dance*

I got some things you could call poems, i originally wrote as songs, but now i have no guitar Oh, and i can't sing...

I guess if anyone does read these, it may help you to know that i'm a Christian

-no title-

Lying here, i'm kept awake
One question running through my mind
After all i know you know
So won't you tell me why?

It's easy to feel safe
To take all this for granted
But now i stop and realise
I'm really just so small

It seems to me a pointless waste
And this only causes pain
And after all i know you know
So won't you tell me why?

I know i can't change the past
It's where i go from here that counts
I won't let life just pass me by
What difference can i make?
If it was me that died that day
Could i look back and smile?

And after all i know you know
And i'll never know why.

-written after the tragic death of a first year student at my unversity


Someone like you

With a smile like a bright summer's day
It's not hard to describe the way
You make me feel special
Somewhere deep inside
You help me forget
All the tears that i've cried

Because someone like you
Can brighten the night
Only someone like you
Can make this world light

Just seeing you can melt my frozen heart
You're beautiful, just like a work of art
You put a smile on my lips
And sparkle in my eyes
You bring joy to my life
Which i just can't disguise

Because someone like you
Can bring colour to grey
Only someone like you
Keeps me happy all day

If ever I'm down, I turn to you
But when you're laid low, what can you do?
'Cause people don't see
This life's hard on you too
The world causes pain
And it's hurting you too

Because someone like you
Can't always be warm
And someone like you
Needs help through the storm

But someone like you
Still brightens the night
And someone like you
Can make my world light

-written for my friend Cat, on her 19th birthday, when she was down

And to end on a lighter note, we have what i have entitled "The Donut Song"

I go nuts for donuts
I eat them a hundred at a time!
They're shipped in from America
Every day and they're all mine!
If you want a donut, just come along and ask me
You'd better say please and you can have one for twenty p...

-chorus-

Oh i love my donuts
I love the way they taste
The only bad one that i've had
Was made using fish paste
Oh i love my donuts
Because they taste so nice
With sugar, jam, and squidgy dough
I wish that i could eat them twice!

If i didn't eat my donuts
I don't think that i would still be alive
I eat them really fast
In ten minutes i ate ninety-five!

-slower-

And sometimes, to chill out, I sit down by the TV
A donut in my right hand -
And in my left hand i've got three....

-repeat chorus-

-grand finale-

And even though my doctor says
I won't live to see twenty-four.....ohhh.....
I eat them by the truckload
I eat them straight up off the floor
I feast on them all day and night
And now i can't fit through my door
But even though i'm stuck in bed
I'll eat 'til I can eat no more!

-the last 6 lines should all be said in one breath


Mmm, long post

Edited by Raylen, 06 May 2004 - 12:12 AM.

[JaceBowman]

I've got a figment of poetry in me and I can make up my own so here go's

I'm at my laptop no mistake
To play a game for minor sake
On with my Ranger and also my pally
And yet I haven't still bought a hally
The Grassy Meadow and Shallow Stream
Are both connected or so it seem
Along a worn path and near Southern Gate
Both commonly visited: new, old, or late
Though I see not any graphics upon my screen
I see many people all nice, good, or mean
You'd get on at night or spring out at day
But the people are always nice anyway

Bowlin_The_Final takes a bow.

[Roidhun]

Just a little haiku written on a dour day looking at a picture of mountains:

Dark clouds fill the sky
longing for the hidden sun
mountains dormant lie

And the poem that came to me early that morning:

Dark clouds streaming slowly by,
Wind in trees and smell of rain.
Though light shines brightly from the East,
My sorrow fills my heart and brain.
Why did you have to leave this night?

Dark clouds still streaming by,
My tears, like rain, fall to the ground.
Though light shines brightly from the East,
In my mind there is no sight, no sound.
Why did you have to leave this night?

Bright light shining from the sky,
My love, you'd want me to be strong.
Though dark clouds still are in my mind,
I'll try to smile and sing our song.
Why did you have to leave this night?

Maybe it has to be said that my mother was dying at the time from cancer and i'd just heard of the death of my old highschool sweetheart in an auto accident that night, so my mood was rather sad. Somehow it just felt right to continue the dark clouds theme.

Oh and btw English is not my native language

[Zylia]

Mutual Feelings
If you move
I’ll go with you
I’ll stand by your side
When you feel sad
I’ll stay by you and cry
You don’t need to be scared
When I am close to you
Because I feel what you feel
And I’m scared to lose you too…

[Teh_Fluff]

Broken

Can hardly breathe, barely grasping what I have now. Broken a thousand times before, my heart is nothing but a shattered piece of brail, there is nothing left for me. I lay here whiping the blood off of whats left of my damaged shell that is my body. Torn apart by so many lovers, friends and foes taking advantage of the weakened state of minds that is me. Controlled thoughts no longer capable. My last breath is nearing me as I no longer have the will to live and love, this helpless shell of a body has been used and abused too much to want to continue on with this hellish loveless life of mine. Broken a thousand times and no longer to be broken again this torn heart of mine will no longer give out what it once could. Love long lost, never to love again.

That would be my most recent thing I wrote. I don't write much anymore but occassionally something happens and there it is. My Poetry Is where you can find most of my stuff, theres very little I haven't transfered from my old archives, my apologies for not commenting on your peoples work, I'm just not a very good critic.

[Zelimos]

i see alot of people have put © Copyright notices under their poems. I haven't done so with any of mine, because i'd be pretty impressed with myself if somebody liked them so much as to use them. But good work people.

I haven't wrote a new one in a while, i guess it's because i need that depressing feeling, and to be hurt by something, as that gives me inspiration to write. wierd lol

[Amy]

~The Unknown Road~

Silence, soft and yet harsh
Whispering echoes and turbulent throughts
Quiet memories and screamed emotions
Tender passion and fierce tears
Forsaken secrets and forgiven betrayal
Illusions and facts
Twisted lines and straight obstacles
Steps, leaps, roadblocks
The road is never known

Copyright ©2004 Shella Rae Mills

*note, Zelimos, the only reason I have put copyright on mine is because those are the ones that are already published. Look forward to seeing more writing from all. Have a great day! ~Amy in game.*